, Salem, MA

December 6, 2012

The reader's eye

The Salem News

---- — Name: Dave Delorey

Hometown: Beverly

Description: Eastern Point Light, Gloucester

Camera info: GE 1486 TW


“The wall and its shadow on the left act as a ramp to force you into this image. This strong directional movement slams you into the lighthouse and buildings. As you slide into the image, the wave crashing onto the rocks brings your eye immediately around to the left. At that point, you get a break and can focus your attention on the cloud formations. The composition matches the speed and fury of the wave crashing onto the rocks. This photo would benefit by cropping the right-hand side to eliminate the distracting fence. Also, it would help if the date on the bottom were not there.”